Yes, that hinge-pin moment did work for me, but it was because I didn't want them to continue. The thought of someone in such a dark state of mind watching me in an intimate moment like that is, to me, horrifying.
Ooooh, that's very cool, and, yes. I had that sense, too, of something good twisted into something wrong enough to be kinda horrific, for them and for me. That the story is sailing along as it is, all sweet and hot and fraught and involving, and then, suddenly, bam, it all goes south, is a big part of the appeal of the story for me, and what makes me feel that, though it's not truly non-con, it sort of is, or maybe it just makes me feel that it is, while it isn't, which is also very cool.
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Date: 2005-08-23 09:08 pm (UTC)Ooooh, that's very cool, and, yes. I had that sense, too, of something good twisted into something wrong enough to be kinda horrific, for them and for me. That the story is sailing along as it is, all sweet and hot and fraught and involving, and then, suddenly, bam, it all goes south, is a big part of the appeal of the story for me, and what makes me feel that, though it's not truly non-con, it sort of is, or maybe it just makes me feel that it is, while it isn't, which is also very cool.