Do-Over, by Carolyn Claire

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Do-Over
John/Rodney, R, Humor: This is a short, kind of silly humor piece with a little angst, a little porn, written for the sga_flashfic community. I enjoyed it, with some reservations.

( On to my thoughts )

(This is a an example of how one would format and might open discussion of a story. The poster can review the story, like I did, or can use the story as a jumping-off point for a deeper discussion of some particular element(s)--say, characterization, in this instance. Please always cut-tag the actual discussions, and link to the page where the author's info and warnings are listed, or include that info in your summary. If you don't need it for that purpose, the summary is optional.

This is, obviously, my own story, used for demonstration purposes only. Please don't review your own stories or submit your own stories for review/discussion. You needn't discuss this one; it's an example. You can ask questions here about posting things, if you like.)