She does have a very interesting writing style, and a great take on the McKay/Sheppard dynamic - I think this is why the canon inconsistencies stood out even more for me? Because if she'd been a clunky writer, I'd have abandoned the story two paragraphs in and never thought of it again. Instead, I remembered it as "that POV-shifting story with the coffee and Lt. Bates."
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Date: 2006-07-14 05:19 am (UTC)The math porn was way cool.