Oh, me again. I went and read The Pegasus Society just to make sure I ws working within the same reference frame.
1. Lt Bates. It didn't even see the words, actually. I'm sure it's there, but I was so totaly distracted by the Math Porn, that it completely escaped my notice.
2. Donuts & Toast. I read them, rolled my eyes and moved along. Ditto for Coffee. I think I was more focused on the Alteran database, and the level at which the AI focused on the Dysfunctional Duo.
I think that I was able to disregard the glaring errors because Sab's very interesting writing style. I did notice the constantly switching POV, and I was thrown a bit here and there by it. What I did notice was the amount of time & resources McKay's allocated to a MENSA test, with the Wraith only a few weeks away. However, I can be easily distracted by Porn, so I just rolled with it. Also, it was an interesting take on McKay & Sheppard, their interaction on the gymnastics mental and physical. I'd still rate it as a damn cool story, despite the issues!
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Date: 2006-07-13 02:20 am (UTC)1. Lt Bates. It didn't even see the words, actually. I'm sure it's there, but I was so totaly distracted by the Math Porn, that it completely escaped my notice.
2. Donuts & Toast. I read them, rolled my eyes and moved along. Ditto for Coffee. I think I was more focused on the Alteran database, and the level at which the AI focused on the Dysfunctional Duo.
I think that I was able to disregard the glaring errors because Sab's very interesting writing style. I did notice the constantly switching POV, and I was thrown a bit here and there by it. What I did notice was the amount of time & resources McKay's allocated to a MENSA test, with the Wraith only a few weeks away. However, I can be easily distracted by Porn, so I just rolled with it. Also, it was an interesting take on McKay & Sheppard, their interaction on the gymnastics mental and physical. I'd still rate it as a damn cool story, despite the issues!