ext_7664 ([identity profile] mmmchelle.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] the_comfy_chair 2005-08-17 01:26 am (UTC)

Re: part I

I think that the Hindsight John, at this point, is very much in need of human contact.

I agree. I bought their relationship. I didn't feel Rodney commandeered John's life. They barely see each other for long stretches of time, and I can imagine Rodney calling him frequently, because he does obsess.

There were parts of the story that I wish had been better, but it was all technical stuff, rather than character stuff. I'll put that in another comment.

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